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Hiding

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Literature Text

Trying to hide,
In this mine.
Running from my past,
I will make this my last.
As i take my last breath,
I dive into the deapth.
I am finished with this life.
Now is my turn to take the schythe!
This was a challenge from ~thewanderingone888 She gave it to me because i normally only do free verse poems but now she said i could try to do one like this! Anyway's tell me what you guys/ladies think?
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WhiteFang999's avatar
Wow, this is really good!